Critique my Logo Design

hi, working on initial concepts sketches did company logo. company <removed>.

want simple yet sophisticated, says <removed> @ first glance.

let me know thoughts, , don't.

comments welcome , appreciated.

thanks!

edit: images removed.

lot feedback , comments, points made, both technical , constructive. going work on doing refinements et.

again!

 

i'd go 3 or 7

 

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