First attempt at a music video / short film; comments?

hello..

friend , put short music-video type of film student competition, , first attempt @ either 1 of us. granted yes, it's not original piece own, it's our interpretation of how iron , wine cover of "such great heights" might change original.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=osfe5fnrxjq

anyway.. it's far perfect (a few touches skipped in end due deadline ..) overall we're both happy result. shot on canon 7d, 5d mkii, canon 50 1.4, canon 135 f2l, , wide angle..28-70 believe @ 2.8.

love hear comments

 

it's good. didn't come off amateur video , goes music. couple of small things though. enjoying progression beginning of video until 90 seconds in, , of scenes earlier repeated again (at least earlier location repeated after moving away on course of minute) in 0:40 , 1:42-1:43. take shots @ 1:43 , group 1 @ 0:40 instead of dispersing later in video because interrupts continuity of scene progression. there's few other places happens that's me being technically critical.

noticed single-frame edit @ 2:28 of black (between notebook shot , phone booth) needs taken out. overall video , liked it.

 

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